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copywriting
21 posts
- 02TuesdayMain Essay·
For years, I took the easiest route when shortening long paragraphs: I stripped adjectives, deleted adverbs, and cut the text to 80 words; the text shrank, but the only vivid friction that persuaded the reader vanished with it.
Trimming a 300-Word Paragraph to 3 Sentences Without Cutting the Load-Bearing Pillar
Trimming long paragraphs is not about reducing word count; it is the craft of separating the load-bearing pillars that hold up the building from mere decoration.
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- 02TuesdayMain Essay·
For years, I ended my copy with 'SIGN UP NOW' or 'BUY NOW' in all caps. I thought shouting at people would make them listen; in reality, I was only raising their defense shields.
Unclickable Commands: The Craft of Turning CTA Verbs into Value
Demanding imperative verbs kill engagement; a successful call to action does not demand effort from the user, but promises the value waiting on the other side of the click.
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- 05FridayFramework·
For years, I ended newsletters and landing pages with 'Sign Up Now' or 'Click Here'—until I realized this authoritarian tone was building a digital wall rather than driving engagement.
The Value-Action Matrix: A Framework for Transforming Pushy Imperatives into Persuasive Invitations
A four-step practical framework to transform chore-heavy mechanical imperatives in calls to action into benefit-driven value verbs.
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- 01MondayOpening·
For years, I ended every newsletter with "DOWNLOAD NOW" or "SIGN UP TODAY," unaware that barking orders triggers resistance rather than action.
The Imperative Trap in Sales: Why 'Click' Fails in CTAs
For years, I thought slapping bold imperative verbs at the end of copy would spur readers into action. But barking orders triggers resistance, not engagement.
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- 06SaturdayDifferent Angle·
For years, I plastered 'BUY NOW' and 'SIGN UP' in all caps across buttons—only to realize nobody wants to take orders from a copywriter they don't even know.
The Hubris of the Imperative: How to Write CTAs That Don't Boss the Reader Around
For years, we slapped 'click now' at the end of our copy and watched engagement plummet. Here are workshop secrets to crafting closing lines that emphasize what the reader gains instead of bossing them around.
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- 06SaturdayDifferent Angle·
If you're stuffing sentences with ghost subjects like 'the system' or 'experts' just to keep them active, you might be pulling readers away from the actual action.
Rehabilitating the Passive Voice: How the "Always Use Active Voice" Dogma Suffocates Your Writing
For years, I blindly followed the "never use passive voice" rule and cluttered my prose with redundant subjects. But the passive voice isn't writer laziness—it is strategic spotlight management.
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- 01MondayOpening·
For years at my editorial desk, I defended the 'make every passive sentence active' rule like gospel; yet by tiring the reader with 'who did this?' even when the actor was irrelevant, I was sabotaging the real focus of the sentence.
Passive Voice Phobia: How the Obsession with Active Voice Harms Your Writing
A confession on how years of turning every passive sentence active exhausted my prose—and the moments where the passive voice actually saves the day.
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- 04ThursdayCase Study·
For years, I broke complex paragraphs into bullet points to make them readable—only to realize I was placing mental speed bumps that forced readers to shift gears on every single line.
The Cost of Asymmetric Lists: Stripe's Craft of Parallel Bullet Points
Moving beyond treating bullet points as a dumping ground for random sentences, we break down the parallel grammar architecture Stripe uses on its product pages.
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- 04ThursdayCase Study·
Whenever my writing lacked flow, I used to construct bridges like 'however' or 'in addition'; hoping these fillers would carry the reader forward, I realized too late that I was merely papering over weak structural logic.
Conjunction Laziness: How Basecamp's Writing Flows Without 'Also'
Needing transitional phrases like 'also' or 'on the other hand' between paragraphs is rarely a grammar issue—it's a structuring problem. Here is the micro-tactic for building a given-new information chain for organic flow.
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- 06SaturdayDifferent Angle·
If you entrust a sentence's impact to adjectives, you are lying to your reader.
The Fallacy of Conveying Emotion with Adjectives: Why Verbs Are the Engine of Writing
We debunk the myth that good writing relies on heavy adjective descriptions. The true load-bearing column of a text is not adjectives dictating what the reader should feel, but strong verbs showing the action.
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- 04ThursdayCase Study·
For years, I looked for fancier, flashier adjectives to strengthen my sentences. It took me a long time to realize that the more I painted the copy, the more I drained its soul and left the reader motionless.
From Adjectives to Verbs: Basecamp's 'Action-Driven' Copy Revolution
We examine how adjectives—often thought to embellish copy—actually drain energy, and how Basecamp pruned adjectives from its marketing copy to build a more persuasive rhythm with strong verbs.
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- 03WednesdayData·
For years, I leaned on adjectives like 'innovative, flawless, peerless' to make copy sound impressive—until A/B tests revealed that paragraphs loaded with ornate modifiers had read-through rates under 15%.
The 30% Rule: Why Dwell Time Doubled When We Cut Adjectives and Boosted Verbs
For years, I relied on adjectives to embellish copy. Yet data proves that action-driven, strong verbs dramatically improve dwell time and readability.
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- 02TuesdayMain Essay·
For years, I decorated my copy with adjectives like 'impressive' and 'striking'—only to realize I was crushing the reader under an ornate yet sluggish pile of words.
Overcoming Adjective Obesity: Rebuilding the Backbone of Writing with Verbs
Adjectives do not enrich copy; they crush the reader beneath an ornate yet sluggish pile of words. To boost rhythm and persuasion, detox from adjectives and lean into strong verbs.
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- 01MondayOpening·
For years, I believed stringing together adjectives like 'effective, impactful, and innovative' elevated copy; in reality, what convinces readers isn't the paint job, but the engine.
Ditching Adjective Vanity: Why Verbs Are the Engine of Copy
Adjectives meant to polish copy often erode credibility; what persuades readers isn't the paint job, but specific verbs driving the action.
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- 06SaturdayDifferent Angle·
For years, I asked content creators for inspiring, relatable, and fluid copy; the outcome was always the same: forced jokes, artificial tone, and exhausting drafts.
The Positive Brief Trap: Why Stating What You Want Ruins the Copy
A great brief doesn't hand the writer an endless open sky; it gives them a minefield map clearly marking the pits to avoid.
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- 03WednesdayData·
For years, I sent writers pages of 'do this' lists and kept getting cookie-cutter, lifeless copy. Then I turned 80% of the brief into a 'what not to write' list.
80% Negative Volume: The Mathematical Power of Saying 'What I Don't Want' in a Brief
I spent years sending writers multi-page 'do this' checklists and getting soulless copy in return. The solution was flipping the brief into a 'what not to write' list.
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- 02TuesdayMain Essay·
For years, I sent content creators pages of 'write this' briefs; the outcome was always the same: everything I asked for was in the copy, yet its soul was suffocated by cliches I never wanted.
Negative Criteria: The Power of the 'Don't' List in Content Briefs
Workshop notes on developing a 'don't list' formula that liberates writers through constraints—after years of frustration with prescriptive, purely positive briefs.
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- 05FridayFramework·
Are your guides turning into encyclopedias? Discover how to rescue H3 subheadings from informational bloat and turn them into single-step micro-actions.
The Encyclopedia Trap in Subheadings: The 'Single Micro-Action' Framework for H3s
For years, I treated subheadings in my guides as informational dump sites, drowning readers. Here is how to rescue H3 headings from theoretical definitions and turn them into single-step, actionable prompts.
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- 06SaturdayDifferent Angle·
If you think designing your opening paragraph like a literary puzzle will keep readers patiently scrolling to solve the 'big secret,' it's time to inspect the cliff dive in your bounce rate analytics.
Building Mystery in Intro Paragraphs: The Hidden Cost of Stalling Readers
For years, I thought crafting literary riddles in the opening paragraph would hook readers. In truth, digital craft isn't about conjuring mystery—it's about laying your cards on the table in the first second.
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- 04ThursdayCase Study·
For years I treated opening paragraphs like literary puzzles—and lost readers in the first 15 seconds.
The High Cost of Building Mystery in Intros: Basecamp’s ‘Get to the Point’ Revolution
Moving past the common writer's trap of manufacturing suspense in intros, we explore Basecamp's clarity-driven conversion lessons on laying your cards on the table from sentence one.
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- 03WednesdayData·
For years, I wrote headlines like 'this will change your life'—only to learn that tricking readers at the front door loses far more clients than shutting it in their face.
State the Outcome, Don't Hide the Secret: The 80% Drop-Off of Clickbait and Click-Through Honesty
For years, I paid the price of hiding the topic behind mystery with sky-high bounce rates. Guided by data and workshop experiments, here is why honest headlines convert better.
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